Elevator Pitch No. 3

Reflection: I had an overwhelming positive response to the shirt that I chose so I had no choice but to wear it again (but believe me, I have a lot of nice clothes). The only criticism I received had to do with possibly adding logo or something to make my clothes (Demize) more distinguishable. This is something I had previously thought of but didn't include in my pitch so this time around I did. I also decided to include some of the brands that fit my initial description. I am not sure if this helps or not so I would like to hear some feedback related to that.